Hecatia: The Luckless Gambler

[Hecatia]

Hecatia

Luckless Gambler

RACE,

Gerudo

GENDER,

Female

AGE,

20

SEXUALITY,

Hetero

POSTITION,

Wanderer

PERSONALITY,

Hecatia is shy at first, and can come across as bit rough, but once she gets to know you she warms up, a lot [ ] She has a big sense of honor, and can be quite loyal, almost to a fault. She's compassionate of other's problems, and situations in life, considering her own as well. She has a soft spot for animals especially. Being slightly sarcastic is how she shows her affection. Her warrior nature keeps her planning one step ahead of the game, always being prepared. Also having a bit of a gambling problem, the only thing worse than her problem is her luck.

APPEARANCE,

Hecatia has shoulder length, fairly spiky, red hair and tan skin, as is typical of Gerudo’s, and pale green eyes. She is petite for a Gerudoand is currently emaciated as per a lost bet she made with her twin sister where she was to live, basically, as a bum. Therefore, at this point she wears only a simple dress of pale cream, and boots of a medium brown. She uses her blanket as a cape which she ties together with a silver necklace chain she found. The bet only allows her to carry with her a water skin, and her weapons; A sword and the Bag of Bones.

NON-MAGIC,

-Blanket
-Leather Boots
-Water Skin

MAGIC,

- Bag O' Bones: A bag that holds twenty five bones. The bones are used for fortune telling. However, only three hold TRUE power. Using these three bones Hecatia can summon demons; one per bone. She can summon all three at once, for three posts, with a four post cool down.
-DAMANI: Link A 3 foot tall human looking doll, genderless, and has stitched together black and white wings that are smaller than her back. They are for display purposes only. Wears a white shift, and has white hair that is cut short, and straight. Has emotionless red eyes, and tanned skin. Casts:
Heal- one post for minor cuts and bruises, two for major. Two post cool down on minor, four on major.
Weakness = Fire type Attacks.
-ZASHA: Zasha is a twin demon, Sigmund being his twin. Zasha is around five foot ten, and wears dark blue clothing, with an artfully cut up right sleeve; his left is gone. He wears torso armor as well as leg and arm bracers. His bracers are extended widthwise to create two mini shields. His pants are 3/4 length, and he goes barefoot. His hands and feet are callused, and he is strong against melee attacks.
Weakness: Ice Attacks.
-SIGMUND: Zasha's twin. He wears a similar outfit, in a light blue hue. He wears no armor, and has a headband of red. He carries two swords, and multiple knives, and smaller weapons that he seems to generate out of nowhere. He could easily be compared to a ninja.
Weakness: Ice Attacks.

Image for Twins: Link

RACIAL ABILITIES,

Stealth- As thieves by trade, the Gerudo are naturally stealthy, able to move unseen and unheard almost anywhere.
Open Says Me- Trained in picking locks, there are very few doors that can keep the Gerudo out.
Sand Beasts- The Stalhounds of the desert are a back of dead dogs with a jagged bite. Living in the desert, the Gerudo have learned to train and summon these beasts and use them to their advantage. A pack of four Stalhounds may be summoned for three posts with a four post cooldown.

WEAPONS,

• Sword- A saber with a plain hilt wrapped in deep red cloth.
•Bag o’ Bones (MAGICAL)- Literally it is a small bag of oddly shaped bones. Each one is thoroughly and painstakingly engraved with Gerudo writing and when used she can call upon the demons trapped inside them.

HISTORY,

Hecatia grew up in the Gerudo village with her mother and twin sister Rinara. She studied sword play, and often explored the outlying lands. She would bring wounded animals back to the village and nurse them in secret; her mother was not too fond of furry creatures. When she was old enough the village mystic took her on as an apprentice for a time, and gave her The Bag of Bones, which she showed quite a proficiency for. She also taught her how to read palms, and throw the bones in order to tell fortunes. This is when she discovered her affinity for water, however scant it was in Gerudo Valley. Her abilities enabled her to scry for water, and to use water to scry for various things. She was very close to her sister, who was more often than not her sparring partner; she often bet against her sister, and to this day has not won a single bet. Once or twice their mother stepped in when the stakes were too high. It was on one of these days that she made a somewhat foolish bet (considering her track record). Hecatia was bragging that she was the better looking twin, and so Rinara bet her that she could get a man before Hecatia. The sisters went out, and keeping in contact everyday. Rinara won, and went back to the village to raise her daughter. As a penalty Hecatia was forced to come back to the village and, leaving everything she owned, set out again bringing only the necessaries, such as weapons a cloak, and a waterskin. Thus we find her today...

FACE CLAIM,

[b]Darker Than Black[/b] Havoc

[Hecatia]

I think I may have some re-working to do.... -.-

[Admin]

Well, over all it isn't bad, a few coding errors (right down by the history) that aside though I have a few things to say about said History.

You mention her affinity for water, what exactly do you mean? Does she just have a natural talent for finding water sources, no matter the circumstances? Also, at the end you say weapons twice...

That aside, it's not bad. Can't wait to see the revisions~!

[Hecatia]

Modified~

[MODS]

No, I'm not dead. Just busy.

Anyway, just in case, remember that you don't have an Empty Slot under 'Magic' because you used it for your Bag o' Bones and Gerudos only get one magic slot to start.

On the note of your bag though, I'm going to need to ask for a lot more clarification. Just what do these demons look like? What traits do they have? What are these spells they can apparently cast? You leave a lot of important details out that would determine their power, since as it is right now, they could potentially be thirty feet tall and able to disintegrate the world with a single word. That's a tad extreme, but you get my point. We need to know more about these demons so we can say whether or not they're too powerful.

Fix those things and then we'll check again.

[Hecatia]

O.o Let me talk to Zelda and I'll get back to you. She's actually the one who came up with the Bag O' Bones. And I'll edit the empty magic slot. ^^; Forgot about that.

[Admin]

Yeah, sorry, I was half asleep when I read this so I toooootally missed that.

Hecatia and I spoke, but I'll post it here so she doens't forget and for any clarification.

The bag of bones does need to be explained, what kind of magic do they have? What do they look like? What is the cool down on their spells if they can cast? Note, if they are elemental they all need to be the same element, you can't have one be fire and the other water, etc, etc.

There, sorry about that.

[Darivan Caol]

Sorry, dif charrie same person, but here I am!

Okay I thought about it, and here's what I have:

~4 bones (down from 25)
~Each demon can cast from 1-2 spells, if any.
-DAMANI: Link A 3 foot tall human looking doll, genderless, and has stitched together black and white wings that are smaller than her back. They are for display purposes only. Wears a white shift, and has white hair that is cut short, and straight. Has emotionless red eyes, and tanned skin. Casts:
Heal- one post for minor cuts and bruises, two for major. Two post cool down on minor, four on major.
Weakness = Fire type Attacks.
-SIREN: Link A small creature standing no more than 6 inches tall, is built for confusion. A female demon, Siren wears barely anything at all, and has bat wings, and her skin is coated with a fine navy blue fur. She has short, spiky hair, and red eyes. Siren can cast two spells:
Confuse- Siren emits a focused sonic blast in the direction of the enemy. Does not work if the enemy can move. Adds one cool down to the last attack the enemy used, if within the last two posts. Two post cool down if unsuccessful, if successful has a ten post cool down.
Locate-Using the same sonic ability, this attack is more like a bat's echo location. If there is someone near, or it is dark, Hecatia can safely avoid, or navigate the area. Has a three post cool down.
Weakness = Melee Attacks.
-ZASHA: Zasha is a twin demon, Sigmund being his twin. Zasha is around five foot ten, and wears dark blue clothing, with an artfully cut up right sleeve; his left is gone. He wears torso armor as well as leg and arm bracers. His bracers are extended widthwise to create two mini shields. His pants are 3/4 length, and he goes barefoot. His hands and feet are callused, and he is strong against melee attacks.
Weakness: Ice Attacks.
-SIGMUND: Zasha's twin. He wears a similar outfit, in a light blue hue. He wears no armor, and has a headband of red. He carries two swords, and multiple knives, and smaller weapons that he seems to generate out of nowhere. He could easily be compared to a ninja.
Weakness: Ice Attacks.

Image for Twins: Link

**EDIT: Still have a little more to do just wanted to update ya!
****EDIT: ALL DONE

[Admin]

I'm going to take a second, flick you in the forehead and stop you right there.

While this is cool, I did mention -points to last post- say that should your demons have magic they needed to all have the same magic, right now I see at least 3 different types of magic )not going to complain about the melee fighters). Sorry, I think the demons need to stick to one uniformed magic unit.

[Hecatia]

All modified as according to plan!

[Admin]

ACCEPTED
Finally, looks good~ Have fun and -throws confetti- you're the first gerudo~! yay!