The 100 Year Prince

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Cyriprus Dragmire

The 100 Year Prince

RACE,

Gerudo.

GENDER,

Male

AGE,

17 Standard Years

SEXUALITY,

Heterosexual

POSTITION,

Royal Prince of the Gerudo Tribes.

PERSONALITY,

First and foremost, Cyriprus is the peak of humanoid structure, or so he believes after having the idea nailed into his brain for fifteen years on end. As such, he tends to overestimate his own abilities and influence which, whale impressive by any means, pale in comparison to the older and better established leaders. Secondly, he’s still a free spirit, and tends to enjoy his position to be best of his ability whale still doing his job. Don’t mistake this for being lazy, however. He always tries to hit a problem before it gets worse, no matter how small it is. And you know what? The Geurdo simply adore him for that.

APPEARANCE,

Cyriprus has the standard big&large figure. He ties his thick, greasy, red hair into a topknot, roughly a foot long, and shaved down the rest of his head. Everything about his face is sharp, from his triangular nose to the squared off ears to his abnormally slanted eyes (which are a dark grey) Do to a few, how shall we say, unfortunate instances as a child, most of his teeth have a semi-shredded appearance that causes most small children to tremble

Perhaps Cyriprus’s greatest identifying factor is his skin. The hear of the Gerudo sun as well as herbal polis that he uses to treat his skin daily his skin daily, causes his skin to take on a light brown , almost spray-on tan color. This is smooth, without any blemishes other the a few training scratches. The backs of his hands and lower arms are covered in curved scars, scimitars lacking guards as they do. His feet are thin and thick, and make his posture intimidating straight

MAGIC,

- Son of the Sand- Wielding the magic of the desert, Cyriprus can control up to four cubic meters of sand
- Din’s Chasmaker.

WEAPONS,

Din’s Chasmaker is a standard Gerudo Schimiter, except for the reddish tint of the blade, as it was forged from the reddest earth to can only be found near Din’s landing site. Along with it’s incredible hardness, Din’s Chasmmaker does just that; makes chasms. They aren’t deep chasms mind you, only about ten feet deep with walls rough enough to climb.

HISTORY,

Let’s just say it was about time
After a long stretch of broken bands and scarping a living out of the bleak desert, the calendar said it was time for the next 100 Year King. From across the wastes, gerudo of all bands descended onto the gerudo fortress, to witness the birth of their new King. Imagine Lion King, and you sort of get the idea of what it looked like, save all the holding and bowing came later, after he was born.

And thus came the bronze spoon in his mouth (what, you think the Gerudo can afford silver?) As a child growing up, the United Tribe spared no effort to make him both as happy and skilled as possible. The finest Wizzrobes, the stealthiest cat burglars, and the smartest scholars from across Hyrule were all hired in to teach the boy, he discovered that he had a particular knack for diplomacy, sword fighting, and history, although his magic and manners left much to be desired. In short, he became somewhat of a mirror to the desert he lived in.

It was only within the past month that he truly took his place as the 100 Year price, his mother having kept things up as regret during his youth. It was a beautiful coordination, with all the trappings and pomp you might expect. And yet, when it came time to put the circlet on his brow, the weight of the world came down then and there. It was now his job to lead the gerudo to a prosperous future, one in which they might no long be sent to live in the Din Forsaken wilderness. This will require a skill, willpower, and more then a bit of luck, but he’s sure he can do it.

FACE CLAIM,

[b]Never gonna happen,[/b] sorry

[Admin]

Hello~ Welcome to Resonance and thank you for joining. I’d just like to run over a few things, I know the mods and admins haven’t posted their own profiles yet which means you had no reference, but we’re here to help. So let’s get this review on the road~

Firstly, the name Dragmire wont be usable as it is Ganondorf’s last name. Also, you have your display name as ‘100yearprice’ You need to change it (go to your profile, click modify and in that first section you can change your display name) to Cyriprus (or your characters name with proper caps if you change it).

Race/Gender
Unless you are applying for the Gerudo King you may not have a Gerudo male since it is exclusively a female race with the exception of the king.

Age
If you are applying to be the Gerudo King you must be at least 20 (sorry, we forgot to mention that in the leaders section, but it has been added) if not then 17 is perfectly acceptable.

Position,
There is currently no Gerudo Prince position available (and probably won’t be considering the female to male ration previously mentioned). If you wish to apply for Gerudo King that is fine, but if not then you need to pick a different occupation. Anyone of the staff members is willing to help if you need ideas~

Personality,
You have some spelling errors (you keep saying ‘whale’ I think you mean ‘while’, easy fix), that aside it sounds like you’re off to a good start, an interesting character, though maybe a little more detail. Does he enjoy games? Does he play tricks on people? Is he a skirt chaser or is he shy around girls? Things like that~

Appearance,
Again, not bad~ He sounds like an interesting looking fellow, a few spelling errors, nothing major, though we do ask that you say ‘and’ instead of using the ‘&’ symbol.

Magic,
Son of the Sand- Okay, 4 cubic feet isn’t that much, it’s a little over 400 pounds of sand, but you really need to specify exactly what he uses the sand for. Does he manipulate it and make soldiers? Does he condense it into weapons? Saying that you simply control sand is a bit too vague, sorry.

It was our mistake, we missed a section in the Character Sheet, so if you wouldn't mind just adding the 'Racial abilities' section right under magic along with the racial abilities from whichever race you choose~
[size=5][font=Courier new][color=of your choice]RACIAL ABILITIES,[/color][/font][/size]
[blockquote][size=1]Post the code for whichever race you've chosen and post it here.[/size][/blockquote]

History,
I hate to do this to you, but for obvious reasons this wont do. If you wish to be the Gerudo King then a bulk of this is okay, though please refrain from using outside sources to describe things (i.e. the Lion King reference). Also, the Gerudo may live in the desert, but they are by no means poor, they steal a great deal of things and are in fact relatively wealthy. A bulk of the Gerudo people live in the Fortress, as a community, on a small few live outside the walls.
So a bit of revision if you plan to be the King, but if not it needs a serious reworking, sorry.
Also, there is a small coding error with your header here, please fix that.

Face Claim,
If you are not using a face claim pleas just remove this section entirely and as for the image at the top of the profile feel free to just take that out as well if you’re not going to use it. Thanks.

There you go, I hope this was helpful and I look forward to seeing the revisions~ Just post here saying you’ve edited it and we’ll give it another look see~